And tell me anything I could do to make it better...I posted this question before but I said I would again because I didn't get a lot of answers...
So sorry about the length, please try to read it all!...
I've just started it.
I'm going to be overly picky, because that will help you more than anything else I could say.
First off; your character is obviously 'super woman', because she's apparently perfect in nearly every way. That's an easy trap to fall in to
Pecos Bill | May 18, 2009
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